December 11th, 2004

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pixystixluver

My name is Virginia and I just joined. I love to write poetry. Although I might not be that good. I would love to have new opinions on my stuff. Here is one of my favourtie poems that I have written. Critiquing most appreciated.

Suicidal Ward

she sits in the corner
of her suicidal ward
rats scurry across the floor
the ground is damp
she's searching for a blade,
shard of glass,
anything
she finds it and
she slices away
cutting deeper
over and over
they shouldn't have put her here
the loneleness eats away at her life
hating, depressing, alone
Death to Suicide

I have a poetry portfolio at PostPoems the link is:
http://www.postpoems.com/members/iliveinhappyland/

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